A museum near your home is looking for people to do a part-time voluntary unpaid job. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum Director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work. in your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir or Madam My name is Lucas Campos, and I am writing you
this
letter to express my deep interest in the part-time voluntary job that you are offering at the museum. I have been studying history at
the
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Algoma University since
last
year, and I believe that working at the museum would be a perfect opportunity to put my knowledge
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practice.
Furthermore
, the building is very close to my home, and
this
would help me a lot
,
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since I do not have a car. I love history, and I can guarantee you that I am a fast learner.
Additionally
, I am good with people, and my professor always says that my presentations are very clear, and anyone could understand the subject that I am presenting. If you believe that I am suitable for
this
position, It is important to mention that my classes are during the morning, and that would probably restrict my
schedules
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However
, I am available from Monday to Friday, and I could start anytime from 3 p.m. I am looking forward to hearing from you, and please let me know if you have any additional questions. Yours faithfully, Lucas Campos
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Voluntary unpaid work
  • Museum Director
  • Intention
  • Contribute
  • Community
  • Art
  • History
  • Skills
  • Qualities
  • Communication
  • Organization
  • Attention to detail
  • Passion
  • Learning
  • Teamwork
  • Availability
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