A museum near your home is looking for people to do a part-time voluntary unpaid job. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum Director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work. in your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir or Madam
My name is Lucas Campos, and I am writing you
this
letter to express my deep interest in the part-time voluntary job that you are offering at the museum.
I have been studying history at the
Algoma University since Correct article usage
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last
year, and I believe that working at the museum would be a perfect opportunity to put my knowledge in
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Furthermore
, the building is very close to my home, and this
would help me a lot,
since I do not have a car.
I love history, and I can guarantee you that I am a fast learner. Remove the comma
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Additionally
, I am good with people, and my professor always says that my presentations are very clear, and anyone could understand the subject that I am presenting.
If you believe that I am suitable for this
position, It is important to mention that my classes are during the morning, and that would probably restrict my schedules
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However
, I am available from Monday to Friday, and I could start anytime from 3 p.m.
I am looking forward to hearing from you, and please let me know if you have any additional questions.
Yours faithfully,
Lucas CamposSubmitted by lucasb7z on
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