The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

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oil

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production

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per day in four countries between 2000 and 2004. The countries are

Nigeria

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Chad

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, Congo, and

Somalia

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, all of them localized in

Africia

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Africa

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Nigeria

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and Congo were the major

productors

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products

over the 5 years,

whereas

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Chad

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was in

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positition

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rank. There was no

oil

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production

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Chad

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until 2002

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when it increased from 8,000 to 50,000 between 2003 and 2004.

Somalia

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was the country which increased

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their

oil

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production

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this

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period, growing 10 times more.

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Nigeria

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faced a small

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until 2002, recovering their

oil

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production

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in 2003 and 2004.

Chad

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presented

the

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major

increasing

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, achieving the same amount

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Somalia

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in 2004, but starting from zero in 2002. Congo faced the most

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fall

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among

theses

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coutries

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countries

, reducing their

production

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gradatively, until

got

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203,000 in 2004.

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period

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Nigeria

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got the first place, followed by

Somalia

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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production, nigeria, chad, somalia with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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156 words

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The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

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Some think that residents should responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government's responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers , are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

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