The diagram shows the process of water treatment

The diagram shows the process of water treatment
The image above depicts the
process
of
water
treatment.
Overall
, there are 10 stages from the source to the faucet in the houses.
The first step is
intake screens that collect the
water
by pumps, normally from a river or lake.
Then
, there is a flash mix including oxidants and
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polyaluminium
chloride. The next
process
is flocculation, followed by a settling basin, where the
water
rests for a
while
to share some particles. Afterwards, the
water
is chlorinated using chlorine and passes through a filter membrane that removes solids and other materials.
Then
, the
water
is disinfected with some chemical products
such
as chlorine, lime, sodium hydroxide and fluoride. In the
last
stage, the clean
water
flows by another pump until reaches the houses' sinks, ready to be consumed. In all the steps, pipes and pumps
to
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pull the
water
keeping it in a continuous
process
.
This
process
is only for sweet
water
. For salted
water
, from oceans, there is another
process
.
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