The diagram shows the process of water treatment

The diagram shows the process of water treatment
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The image above depicts the
process
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of
water
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treatment.
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, there are 10 stages from the source to the faucet in the houses.
The first step is
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intake screens that collect the
water
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by pumps, normally from a river or lake.
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, there is a flash mix including oxidants and
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polyaluminium
chloride. The next
process
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is flocculation, followed by a settling basin, where the
water
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rests for a
while
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to share some particles. Afterwards, the
water
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is chlorinated using chlorine and passes through a filter membrane that removes solids and other materials.
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, the
water
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is disinfected with some chemical products
such
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as chlorine, lime, sodium hydroxide and fluoride. In the
last
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stage, the clean
water
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flows by another pump until reaches the houses' sinks, ready to be consumed. In all the steps, pipes and pumps
to
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pull the
water
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keeping it in a continuous
process
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.
This
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process
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is only for sweet
water
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. For salted
water
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, from oceans, there is another
process
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.
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