In the past, most working people had only one job. However, nowadays, more and more people have more than one job at the same time. What are the reasons for this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job?

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increase

in the amount of individuals who have been working for two

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, concurrently.

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I want to express my opinion about the reasons

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occurrence

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its cons and pros. In my view, rising the number of

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who have side

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going to be happened

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condition

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which any

individuals

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has

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to

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with that.

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increase

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inflation

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rate during the past decade in plenty of countries around the world has made people

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compensate

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with more effort.

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it would be fairly obvious that the mentioned

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. In my view,

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event has both positive and negative consequences.

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, I will provide some of them in the following passage. The significant advantage of

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increase

would be decreasing the lack of

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due to

rising the demand for

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jobs

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to have more income for individuals

as a result

.

On the other hand

, it might have impacts on

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the efficiency

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of

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a person

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. Because working for two

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at the same time lead to

increase

work duration and

then

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of

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, the person

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tired, and the possibility of making mistakes

will be rising

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as well. If I want to simplify that for readers l would say that

due to

sharing the concentration of people between those two works, he/she couldn’t do their best. In conclusion, since the economic problems are inevitable

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it would be

expectable

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that

this

result will be resumed in future.

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of

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this

change has many advantages

as well as

its dark side, I think the governments should find a solution to diminish the

negatives

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points

as well as

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the features of

this

change.