The chart below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in 5 European countries from 2000 to 2012

The chart below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in 5 European countries from 2000 to 2012
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The line chart illustrates
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's membership rates in five European nations' parliaments, namely the UK, Germany, Italy, Belgium, and France, between 2000 and 2012.
Overall
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, the proportion of
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congresspersons climbed in all countries.
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, Germany and Belgium had the highest rates of
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in Congress as opposed to the UK, where the
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's portion was less than others. In 2000, Germany's
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participants rate, which was higher than others at around 35%, experienced marginal growth of around 2%, followed by Italy and Belgium, which
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rates accounted for approximately 25% in the first year for both countries, had risen to just above 40% and slightly more than 30% in 2012, respectively.
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,
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's share in France's parliament witnessed an upward trend from roughly 17% in the initial year to about 23% in 2004, before remaining approximately constant for the next eight years.
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, the lowest female involvement proportion, which was in the UK, surged from nearly 3% to roughly 24% in the final year.
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  • parliament
  • gender equality
  • trends
  • percentage
  • significant progress
  • minimal progress
  • yearly analysis
  • country-specific
  • events
  • elections
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • speculating
  • predictive
  • representation
  • tracking
  • issues
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