The charts below show the males arrested over 5 years and the reasons for most recent arrests
The given graph illustrates the percentage of people among
men
and women arrested during 1989-1994 for different felonies.
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It is clear that
gender was closely related to the percentage of arrested persons on the graph Linking Words
however
, the numbers of arrested were strongly dependent on the kind of crimes.
The pie chart represents the difference between males who committed crimes with the number of 32% meanwhile, the women’s crime rate was almost triple lower than the Linking Words
men
with the number 9%. Use synonyms
Hence
, women followed rules more than Linking Words
men
and the man’s disobedience was more common.
On the table chart can be seen the most common kind of arrest reasons where public drinking was the reason number one for both genders with the data of 30% among females and 37% among males. Drink driving was the second reason for deterrence in general but the quantity of crimes of the male side was double bigger than the female side: 26 versus 14. The theft was the most seldom kind of felony shown in the picture with the figure of arrests quite equal for both sides and presented by the sum of around 15%. Use synonyms
Finally
, the breach of order, assaults and other reasons were similar in the Linking Words
men
's and the women's society and laid between 12-18% intervals.Use synonyms
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