Some people say that main environmental of our time is losing of particular species of animals and plants . Others say thet there are more important enviromental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People believe that environmental

problems

are caused by the

loss

of

animals

and

trees

while

others disagree with that.I believe that the

loss

of

animals

and

trees

is the main cause of environmental

problems

. The imbalance of biodiversity

due

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to losing

animals

and plants.The cutting of

trees

makes the environment

atmosphere

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and atmosphere

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imbalanced and

also

affects

of

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weather conditions.

For instance

, in time rain does not occur. Some people believe that the

loss

of

animals

and

trees

is not the main reason for environmental

problems

because nowadays extinction of

animals

we still alive . There are no effects on human beings .Our lifestyles are improved more

due to

the advancement of technology. There are no

problems

with losing

of

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animals

and

trees

.In cities , there are very less of plants but not much impact on human beings. In conclusion, I believe that there are major effects

due to

loss

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the loss

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of

animals

and plants.Some people agree with the statement that there is no effect

while

others believe that there are major effects.