The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.

The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.
The bar chart illustrates how many people visited museums in three different countries namely China, Tokyo and New York between 2000 and 2005.
Overall
, The highest and lowest annual visitors belong to the National Museums of China and the MET
Museum
of New York respectively.
First,
the number of individuals who visited National museums located in China increased slightly during the five years and reached a peak of almost 15.8
million
in 2005.Meanwhile, after 2000 visitors to the MET
Museum
of New York decreased significantly until 2002 and sat at 6
million
.
In addition
, the number of people who watched the attractions of the MET
museum
experienced a slight increase over three years. In Tokyo, the graph zig-zagged and peaked at 13
million
.
Moreover
,the number of people who visited the Edo
Museum
in 2000 dropped suddenly and stood at approximately 6.2
million
in 2003.
Furthermore
, the annual visitors to Edo increased gradually between 2003 and 2005 and sat at 10
million
.
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