Task 1: -1.07.23 The graph below shows the proportion of types of magazines sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015.
The chart illustrates the
figure
for magazines
sold by a company in 1975, 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, the proportion of sports magazines
sold in 2015 took the largest part, while
the percentage of fashion magazines
in the same year was in the lowest posistion
.
Correct your spelling
position
Sport
Change the noun form
Sports
magazines
always
the best Add a missing verb
are always
sellers
type of Change the noun form
seller
the
company, with 30$ sold in 1975 Correct article usage
apply
and
increased to 35% in 1995 and more than 40% in 2015. The Correct word choice
which
figure
for food magazines
in 1975 was 10%, then
it doubled in 1995 and remain
the same percentage Wrong verb form
remained
with
1975 Change preposition
from
in
2015. In 1975, the number of fashion Change preposition
to
magazines
sold was double than
Correct word choice
that
food
Change preposition
of food
magazines
in the same year. However
, the figure
for fashion magazines
saw a serious negative trend and reached its bottom at 5% in 2015.
Looking at health magazines
, the figure
for it in 1975 was approximately 25%. Then
, it dropped to 20% and remained the same in
the next 20 years. The proportion of the Change preposition
for
others kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
other kinds
magazines
in 1975 was equal to health magazines
, then
in 1995m it climb
to its peak at just over 30%. After that, it Wrong verb form
climbed
felt
to nearly 20% in 2015.Correct your spelling
fell
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, magazines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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