Some Countries have implemented mandatory community programs for young people. In these programs, children aged 16 to 18 do charity work, help old people or work with animals. What are some advantages and disadvantages for this for young people?

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on whether

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aged 16 to 19 do charity work

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as helping elders and working with animals falls into mandatory

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programs rather than mere additional social

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. I personally think that the obligation may include

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and

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disadvantages

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for

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, especially if the

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program

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is considered as a subject to mark in determining

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's path to higher education. Nowadays, in

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world, it is becoming harder to be in touch with social

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. Young people are expected to be

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future leaders but barely have

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time to interact with social life in their surroundings

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the load of studying at school they have already in the first place. If

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condition

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continues

, the leaders in the future that we are expecting will be acting based on

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or materials.

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letting them

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engage with

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community

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the community

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hopefully will contribute

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social interaction.

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, taking care of

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the older

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generation

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the weekend may generate

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that these young people are not disconnected

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the life where they live. Additional value for enabling

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to communicate with

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community

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is shaping emotional

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, with the intention that one day young people as policy-makers would include

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of elders and animals in their framework.

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, I can not disregard the negative effect

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implementing

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policy as mandatory. In several countries

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as South Korea,

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sometimes

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held

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,

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the school and the

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's cooperation. That being said,

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are less likely to get enough rest the entire week, meanwhile if

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do not participate, it will affect their marks. It is particularly concerning

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the fact that adding

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as mandatory will be deemed as increasing the school hours as well. In conclusion, there are sort of affirmative and negative views

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the

enforcibility

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enforceability

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community

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a community

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program

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programs

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for

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to join. Yet it should not hamper the idea that

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matter to

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, but

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what the implementation should

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regulate in its policy is

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apply

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the

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apply

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when the

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program

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will be conducted. The aim to make

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to

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engage with elders and animals

as well as

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children

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's rest time can only be achieved if the policy is inclusive enough to

accomodate

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accommodate

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as well, not merely seeing the importance of

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.