Some Countries have implemented mandatory community programs for young people. In these programs, children aged 16 to 18 do charity work, help old people or work with animals. What are some advantages and disadvantages for this for young people?
it has been a topic to discuss
further
on whether children
aged 16 to 19 do charity work such
as helping elders and working with animals falls into mandatory community
programs rather than mere additional social program
. I personally think that the obligation may include Fix the agreement mistake
programs
advantage
and Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
disadvantage
for Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
children
, especially if the community
program
is considered as a subject to mark in determining children
's path to higher education.
Nowadays, in Correct article usage
a fast-pacing
fast-pacing
world, it is becoming harder to be in touch with social Correct your spelling
fast-paced
event
. Young people are expected to be Fix the agreement mistake
events
world's
future leaders but barely have Correct article usage
the world's
no
time to interact with social life in their surroundings Correct determiner usage
any
because
the load of studying at school they have already in the first place. If Add the preposition
because of
this
condition countinues
, the leaders in the future that we are expecting will be acting based on Correct your spelling
continues
textbook
or materials. Fix the agreement mistake
textbooks
Therefore
by
letting them Change preposition
apply
to
engage with Change the verb form
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community
hopefully will contribute Correct article usage
the community
better
social interaction. Change preposition
to better
For example
, taking care of older
generation Correct article usage
the older
in
the weekend may generate Change preposition
at
idea
that these young people are not disconnected Add an article
an idea
the idea
to
the life where they live. Additional value for enabling Change preposition
from
children
to communicate with community
is shaping emotional Add an article
the community
feeling
, with the intention that one day young people as policy-makers would include Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
prosperity
of elders and animals in their framework.
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the prosperity
On the contrary
, I can not disregard the negative effect in
implementing Change preposition
of
this
policy as mandatory. In several countries such
as South Korea, community
program
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programs
sometimes
held Add a missing verb
are sometimes
in
Change preposition
at
weekend
, Fix the agreement mistake
weekends
according to
the school and the community
's cooperation. That being said, children
are less likely to get enough rest the entire week, meanwhile if children
do not participate, it will affect their marks. It is particularly concerning due to
the fact that adding community
program
as mandatory will be deemed as increasing the school hours as well.
In conclusion, there are sort of affirmative and negative views Fix the agreement mistake
programs
upon
the Change preposition
on
enforcibility
of Correct your spelling
enforceability
community
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a community
program
for Fix the agreement mistake
programs
children
to join. Yet it should not hamper the idea that community
program
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programs
is
matter to Unnecessary verb
apply
children
, but instead
what the implementation should also
regulate in its policy is that
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apply
the
when the Correct article usage
apply
community
program
will be conducted. The aim to make children
to
engage with elders and animals Change the verb form
apply
as well as
children
's rest time can only be achieved if the policy is inclusive enough to accomodate
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accommodate
children
's perspective
as well, not merely seeing the importance of Fix the agreement mistake
perspectives
community
program
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