The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The first plan depicts the

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network accessibility to a city hospital in 2007,

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the second plan illustrates it in 2010.

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it is clear that

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not only the

road

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network efficiency

improved

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at the end

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of the study period but some new facilities

constructed

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around the hospital environment for the convenience of staff and referrals to the hospital.

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the crossroads at the two ends of the Hospital

road

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in 2007 into roundabouts in 2010 in order to alleviate traffic

congestions

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was the most significant improvement in the communication network of that region.

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, the bus stops in the Hospital

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were removed and a novel bus station was established on the west side of the

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.

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of just one parking lot on the east side of the Hospital

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for both the staff and the public utilisation in 2007, another car park was constructed on the east side of the city Hospital for

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public use,

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the former one was dedicated to staff use exclusively.