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The diagram below shows the process of making paper and then how recycled paper is also made.

The diagram below shows the process of making paper and then how recycled paper is also made.
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The diagram below illustrates the process of manufacturing and recycling
paper
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. It consists of numerous steps. Making the product commences with trees being chopped down and finishes with the
paper
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-making machine. Recycling of
paper
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 begins with papers being collected and ends with the usage of a
paper
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-making machine once again.
This
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 summary will begin with a discussion of the manufacturing process.
Firstly
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, forests are cut down to make wooden logs which are
then
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 placed inside a de-barking drum. The output is
then
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 put in a chipper followed by a pulping mechanism, which is filled with liquid water.
Finally
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, the product is let through a cutting device which produces a well-known
paper
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 ready for sale. Once the
paper
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 is sold and,
consequently
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, used, it is collected at a single spot. The used pile is de-inked, which results in the papers becoming blank.
Then
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, these sheets undergo cleaning and fine screening to ensure
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 that it does not have any impurities on them. After that, the mix is placed inside a pulp which is filled with water and is placed in the same
paper
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-making machine, as the one that creates unrecycled
paper
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, as the final step.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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