The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the information about
coffee
and tea buying and drinking habits in three different categories in five
cities
in Australia.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the highest proportion was for people in Melbourne who went to a cafe to drink
coffee
or tea for one month. Meanwhile, Brisbane accounted for the lowest trend for
bought
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buying
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fresh
coffee
. Regarding going to cafes, Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart saw the most percentages among others by nearly 60%, 63% and 62%,respectively.
Furthermore
, the number of people who bought fresh
coffee
or instant
coffee
in
last
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the last
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four weeks had almost the same trend in these three
cities
with proportions of around 38%and 55% for Hobart, followed by 42% and 48% for Melbourne and approximately 45% for Sydney.
By contrast
, as is shown by the graph, Brisbane and Adelaide witnessed the lowest figures among other
cities
by the unchanged percentage for buying fresh
coffee
which is just below 35% of citizens for both
cities
.
Additionally
, in Brisbane, 55% of people bought instant
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks,
while
in Adelaide
this
trend is about 50%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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