The charts below show changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs depict the difference in ownership of electrical household appliances and the time used for doing housework in families in one country over the period from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the trajectories of the appliances tend to increase little by little, whilst the figure for hours drops after about one century.
According to
both charts, Refrigerators and vacuum cleaners started from just a smaller amount when set side by side with the washing machines. There are two automatic machines that climb the rate 0 and 30 in the first year, trending up for 60 to 80 years time
then
completely reaching the top at the year 2000 and remaining stable for over 20 years. The
last
line paused the growth in 1960 with 70 per cent of household users and had a dip in 2 decades after that before it came back to rise again and reach about 75 in the
last
years recorded.
Whereas
the amount of hours of housework seems to be the big contrast with the first chart, the vast quota reported in 1920 shows that it peaks at 50
then
declines rapidly to 20 in 1960, continues to trend down trivial
then
stops at 10 in 2019.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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