The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided maps compare the changes in the street network leading to a
city
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hospital from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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not only the efficiency of the route ending at the
city
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hospital has improved
at the end
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of the study period but we have witnessed more functional uses of unused spaces around the hospital environment, resulting in more convenience for referrals to hospital and reduction in traffic In 2007, concentrating facilities around Hospital
Road
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had increased human and vehicle density in that route. To illustrate
this
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, there was merely one parking lot available for both the public and staff on the east side of Hospital
Road
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, which exacerbated the traffic.
Also
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, six bus stops on both sides of that
road
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introduced more challenges to referrals to the
City
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Hospital
However
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, in 2010, relocating the facilities to unused surroundings and constructing new ones improved the access
road
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efficiency considerably.
For instance
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, allocating the east part of the Ring
Road
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to new parking for the public and the west part of the Hospital
road
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to a bus station,
consequently
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, removing the former bus stops offered more convenience for referrals to the treatment centre.
Furthermore
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, Hospital
road
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intersections with Ring
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road
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Road
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and
City
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road
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Road
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were altered to roundabouts, which offered additional access from the
City
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road
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to the
City
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Hospital.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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