"In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. " Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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acting, many people prefer to see

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movies and read

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. It offers fascinating experience , and

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in the growth of knowledge about our surroundings. To start off, the sophistication and

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tools of scripting

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novels and TV serials alike

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viewership and popularity of

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among the general populace.

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, Incisiveness ,which intends to focus on even minuscule details, in

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and narration of

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the criminal

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story, are proficient in fostering significant suspense and thrill among its audience.

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experience of curiosity and adrenaline rush is the reason why

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among other entertainment categories. I believe, not only is the

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multimedia entertaining but edifying

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. There is no doubt about its Leisure value as illustrated above.

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of their stories

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are either inspired or based on

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incidents.

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, these mystery thrillers

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to addressing our pursuit of intrigue ,

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facilitate us in becoming vigilant and aware

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the possible potential threats to our safety. To expand on

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, by watching

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shows one can foster

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understanding of malicious intentions and common behaviour of criminals.

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can greatly empower an individual to be proficient at recognising those ominous signs, which will facilitate him to avert any threats in the future.

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information can be used by social hackers to gain unauthorized access to my banking system and social media accounts. In conclusion,

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media are crucial not only to quench our thirst for entertainment but to increase our awareness

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about burgeoning anti-social activities in our society.

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, it is the most prominent evolution of the 20th century that offers safety and fun, all in one package

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