The graph below gives information about the sales of five types of vehicles in Country A from 1990 with projected sales until 2020.

The graph compares five types of vehicle projected

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1990 to 2020.

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at first sight the

demand

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for

cars

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which consume less than 1.8

litres

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quickly grows by 2020, at the same time the

demand

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for other

vehicles

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double decreases or stays almost similar. Examining the graph more closely, we can see that, in 1990, the highest point

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of

cars

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which consume more than 1.8

litres

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amounted to about 2.7

million

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vehicles

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. In the same year the

sales

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of station wagons number about two and

the

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half

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million

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vehicles

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. By 2000,

index

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of both vehicle

sales

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slightly

decreases

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and continuously

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down until 2010, and it fell to almost

one

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and

the

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half

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million

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sales

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. After 10 years, by 2020,

demand

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of

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station wagons slightly declined and became a little below

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and a

half

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million

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while

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sales

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of

cars

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which consume more than 1.8

litres

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also

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gradually

fall

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to around 1.2

million

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auto

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.

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,

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to

sales

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of previous

vehicles

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,

demand

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for

cars

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which consume less than 1.8

litres

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increase

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increased

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from 1.8 to 2.4

million

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in

period

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since

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1990 to 2000.

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by 2010 it significantly grows

until

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to

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3.7

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and after that, reaching 2020 it slowly

climb

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approximately

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to approximately

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by

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100 thousand. In comparison with other

vehicles

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, the

lowest selling

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vehicles

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were motorbikes and commercial vans. The first

one

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, in 1990 sold

of

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number

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half

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million

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a million

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, but by 2000 its

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halved and by the middle of the period between 2000 and 2020

this

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sales

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figure almost returned to the previous mark, but

then

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went back to

moderate

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decline by 2020. The second

one

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are commercial vans, in 1990

conversely

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sold

half

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as much as numbers of motorbike

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, but by 2000 they

grown

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doubly and after by 2010 the

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of commercial vans slightly

decrease

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and by 2020

this

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point intersected with

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sales

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the sales

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figure of motorbikes.