The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.

The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.
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The bar chart demonstrates the amount of tourists to three museums located in 3 different countries namely New York, Tokyo and
China
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from 2000 to 2005.
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,
China
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and The USA received a steady uprise in visitors especially for
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,
while
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Japan underwent a noticeable downward trend for over 5 years. Looking at the bar chart for more detail, in 2000, the National Museum started with a humble number of tourists compared to its other counterparts, for reference, there was a double amount of difference when comparing Chinese museums to either New York or Tokyo. Surprisingly, in just 5 years,
China
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's visitors increased exponentially, from 6 million annual visits to nearly triple the amount making
China
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the most visited place for museum visits. On top of that, though there was an increase for New York, the change,
however
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, was not noticeable compared to
China
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, it was only a 2 million difference.
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, Tokyo started as the most well-known thanks to its Edo Museum in 2000 but ended with
last
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place in 2005 with a whopping 4 million difference.

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