The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.
The bar chart demonstrates the amount of tourists to three museums located in 3 different countries namely New York, Tokyo and
China
from 2000 to 2005.
Overall
, China
and The USA received a steady uprise in visitors especially for China
, while
Japan underwent a noticeable downward trend for over 5 years.
Looking at the bar chart for more detail, in 2000, the National Museum started with a humble number of tourists compared to its other counterparts, for reference, there was a double amount of difference when comparing Chinese museums to either New York or Tokyo. Surprisingly, in just 5 years, China
's visitors increased exponentially, from 6 million annual visits to nearly triple the amount making China
the most visited place for museum visits.
On top of that, though there was an increase for New York, the change, however
, was not noticeable compared to China
, it was only a 2 million difference. Moreover
, Tokyo started as the most well-known thanks to its Edo Museum in 2000 but ended with last
place in 2005 with a whopping 4 million difference.Submitted by maituanorange on
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