The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.
The bar chart illustrates how much
money
was given to developing countries
from 5 different organisations between 2008 and 2011.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Organisation
2 and Organisation
3 fund developing countries
more than other organisations. The amount of money
spent on developing nations was rising from Organisation
2 and Organisation
1, while
the figures for Organisation
4 and Organisation
5 had a decline.
Looking at the details, in 2008, developing nations were given around 1.3 billion dollars
and 1.5 billion dollars
from Organisation
2 and Organisation
3, which rose to 1.5 and 1.7 million
dollars
respectively. However
, these figures showed an opposite trend in expenditures in 2010, with the former significantly rising to just under 2.5 million
dollars
, while
the latter dropping to less than 1.5 million
dollars
.
In contrast
, the amount of money
funded by developing countries
was roughly identical for Organisation
1 and 4, starting at above 0.5 million
dollars
. The former increased to just under 1 million
dollars
before declining to around 0.7 million
dollars
in 2010, while
the latter decreased to less than 0.5 million
dollars
. Despite a rise to 0.5 million
dollars
in 2009, the amountChange preposition
of
money
spent declined to nearly 0.3 million
dollars
.
Organisation
5 invested in developing countries
more than 1 million
dollars
in 2008, which declined every year to under 0,5 million
dollars
in 2011.Submitted by wsvllnl on
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