The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the information of the
new-opend
and closed shops in a period of 8 years.
Correct your spelling
newly opened
Overall
, the figures Linking Words
of
both categories Change preposition
for
had
fluctuated over Unnecessary verb
apply
a
8-year period. Change the article
an
While
there are more shops Linking Words
been
closed Wrong verb form
being
in
most of Change preposition
apply
time
, the highest point can be seen in the figure Add an article
the time
of
openings.
Looking at the diagram Change preposition
for
closey
, during 2011-2015, Correct your spelling
closely
while
the number in opening had Linking Words
a
up and down for few times, there was still a peak at around 8500 Change the article
an
in
the Change preposition
at
begining
of the period. Correct your spelling
beginning
Also
, the closures Linking Words
ones
experienced Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
lowest number about 800.
For the next 4 years, the openings were relatively stable, only Change the article
the
saw
a drop Wrong verb form
seeing
by
1000. In the closures, it rose to 5000 and became Change preposition
of
steadliy
as well.Correct your spelling
steadily
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