The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares the information of the

new-opend

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newly opened

and closed shops in a period of 8 years.

Overall

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, the figures

of

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both categories

had

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fluctuated over

a

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an

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8-year period.

While

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there are more shops

been

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being

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closed

in

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apply

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most of

time

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the time

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, the highest point can be seen in the figure

of

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openings. Looking at the diagram

closey

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closely

, during 2011-2015,

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the number in opening had

a

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up and down for few times, there was still a peak at around 8500

in

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the

begining

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beginning

of the period.

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, the closures

ones

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experienced

a

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lowest number about 800. For the next 4 years, the openings were relatively stable, only

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a drop

by

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1000. In the closures, it rose to 5000 and became

steadliy

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steadily

as well.