You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words
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, these days, because of the development of recreational facilities and video games some individuals are addicted to wasting their day on entertainment. As can be seen in all countries, particularly developed countries, there is a wide variety of developed theme parks. So, when these Linking Words
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, the children of governors in Iran have these customs.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea and supports it with relevant examples and explanations.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to using appropriate greetings and closings to maintain a formal tone in your writing.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary range and use more specific and varied words and phrases.
grammatical range
Work on improving your grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.