The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These pie charts illustrate the average sum of power usage in Australian
household
and emissions of the Fix the agreement mistake
households
greenhouse
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gas
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as a result
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energy
.
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of
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for
energy
usage in the residents Use synonyms
whereas
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is holding
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holds
greenhouse
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gas
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emission
. Cooling is the least area in both of the aspects.
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emissions
consume
about 30% of Correct subject-verb agreement
consumes
energy
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emit
32% of Correct subject-verb agreement
emits
greenhouse
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gas
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Heating
system takes 42% of Add an article
the Heating
energy
but Use synonyms
less
responsible for Add a missing verb
is less
the
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gas
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This
matter is Linking Words
ashtonishing
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, refrigeration Linking Words
is emitting
14% of Wrong verb form
emits
greenhouse
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gas
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while
It consumes only 7% of Linking Words
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energy
in the houses.
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the energy
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, cooling, lighting and other appliances leave more Linking Words
gas
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energy
consumption. The Use synonyms
gas
emission rate for other appliances is 28% but the rate is 15% at the time of Use synonyms
energy
consumption. Cooling and lighting Use synonyms
is
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are
also
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gas
than their power-using rate.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words greenhouse, gas, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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