The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These pie charts illustrate the average sum of power usage in Australian
household
and emissions of the Fix the agreement mistake
households
greenhouse
gas
as a result
of used energy
.
Heating is the main reason of
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for
energy
usage in the residents whereas
water heating is holding
the highest percentage of Wrong verb form
holds
greenhouse
gas
emission
. Cooling is the least area in both of the aspects.
Here, we can see heating the water Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
consume
about 30% of Correct subject-verb agreement
consumes
energy
and emit
32% of Correct subject-verb agreement
emits
greenhouse
gas
. Besides
, Heating
system takes 42% of Add an article
the Heating
energy
but less
responsible for Add a missing verb
is less
the
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apply
gas
. This
matter is ashtonishing
. Correct your spelling
astonishing
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, refrigeration is emitting
14% of Wrong verb form
emits
greenhouse
gas
while
It consumes only 7% of energy
in the houses.
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the energy
On the other hand
, cooling, lighting and other appliances leave more gas
compared to their energy
consumption. The gas
emission rate for other appliances is 28% but the rate is 15% at the time of energy
consumption. Cooling and lighting is
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are
also
in the same category as they emit less gas
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