The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017.
This
table graph show
the data of Change the verb form
shows
student
enrolments who study
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studied
in
Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017. It is clear from the graph that with the increase in the Change preposition
at
years
students was increased.
Change to a genitive case
year's
years'
According to
what is shown, in 1937 the new
people Correct quantifier usage
number of new
study
enrolled was 327, after 30 Replace the word
students
years
the student
was
rose to 1133, Unnecessary verb
apply
then
in 2017 it Correct word choice
and then
was goes
up to 6245 Wrong verb form
went
mumbers
in Manchester University . Correct your spelling
members
numbers
Moreover
, male and femle
Correct your spelling
females
has
different percentage with change Change the verb form
have
years
. For example
: women student
has
45% in 1937 Wrong verb form
had
while
men had morethan
5% than women in Correct your spelling
more than
same
Correct article usage
the same
years
. However
, in 1967 male
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males
was
increased to 65 per cent but Unnecessary verb
apply
female
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females
was fell
to 35 per cent. After that women jumped from a 35 ratio Change the verb form
fell
o
Change preposition
to
55
ratio in 2017 and male students dropped Correct article usage
a 55
about
20% in 2017.
Change preposition
by about
whereas
, some students come from within 40 miles of Manchester in first
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their first
years
the numbers around
55%, but in Add a missing verb
were around
second
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their second
years
they reduced to 15% and in last
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the last
years
they decline
to 1-2%. Wrong verb form
declined
On the other hand
, the student
Fix the agreement mistake
students
comes
from 4 countries was 6% Verb problem
apply
then
they climbed from 26 land about 7 rates and in 2017 was came
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came
from102
countries almost 32 rates.Correct your spelling
from
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