The
improvingReplace the word
show examples
of standard
life
in many countries
resultWrong verb form
show examples
toChange preposition
show examples
the plan to combine
to Change preposition
show examples
shops, schools, offices and homes in a separate place. A lot
peopleChange preposition
show examples
support
to Change preposition
show examples
this
strategy
due to
their benefits
whileCorrect word choice
show examples
I believe that has some negative effects
inChange preposition
show examples
resident’s
life
.
On the one hand, the
disposeReplace the word
show examples
toChange preposition
show examples
a specific area would lead to be standard
life
toChange preposition
show examples
the
residentFix the agreement mistake
show examples
when they are separated
withChange preposition
show examples
the industry or supermarket. As can be seen
that Correct word choice
show examples
they would have a good sleep standard because
it’sVerb problem
show examples
not be affected by the
noisyReplace the word
show examples
of transport activities.
In addition
,
atmosphereAdd an article
show examples
is pure when having a
clearlyChange the word
show examples
with each area as industry activities can not affect
to Change preposition
show examples
homes or schools.
However
, it has positive aspects but
also
has negative effects.
On the other hand
, the separating of each area could move to
other placeChange the wording
another place
other places
show examples
in order to
more farReplace the words
show examples
which result in
the aChoose an article
show examples
lot people using increasingly transports
such
as car, motorbike, … to serve their moving.
Furthermore
,
This
problem would cause pollution
naturalChange preposition
show examples
habitats which is the
mostCorrect word choice
show examples
problem in the contemporary day and it
also
affect Verb problem
show examples
negatively to the standard
lifeChange preposition
show examples
of residents
asCorrect word choice
show examples
their health.
And anotherCorrect word choice
show examples
aspectsReplace the adjective
show examples
is a mixed
city
could
be createdWrong verb form
show examples
theCorrect article usage
show examples
connection between people
which is a positive part because their improvement in communication
helpingWrong verb form
show examples
their mental health. And
also
help the
city
increasingly revitalize leading to
attractWrong verb form
show examples
more
the Correct article usage
show examples
tourist to travel.
In conclusion,
although
the plan has many advantages, it
also
brings more disadvantages that my opinion.
However
, depending on the
planingCorrect your spelling
show examples
of the leader of each
city
with their direction paths
they could adjust to suitable
with Change preposition
show examples
their strategy to develop the
city
.