Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Disscus this topic and give your own opinions.
Some individuals believe that
exist
intelligent life outside our Change the verb form
exists
planet
, and a group of people agree that we should try contact
, while
others are against any kind of approach. This
essay will discuss the two different points of view, and I will give my opinion about this
subject.
Some defend that, in case of existence, we should try contact
with aliens. There are two main points to support this
idea. One of these is that we could learn new technologies and evolve our science to a different level. For example
, we could learn new methods to develop a new medicine. Additionally
, a more intelligent being could help us to understand the universe, and
all the mystery around the beginning of our world, and how would be the future of our Correct word choice
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specie
.
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species
However
, another group believes that making contact
would be a great mistake. They argue that we would be in serious danger,
since our Remove the comma
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planet
is full of energy and water, and that would be the only reason that a more intelligent life would need our help. For instance
, they could extract all our energetic
resources, and that could be the end of life Replace the word
energy
in
the Change preposition
on
planet
Earth. Furthermore
, those aliens could bring new diseases or virus
to our Fix the agreement mistake
viruses
planet
, and a new pandemic could start just because of a simple contact
.
In conclusion, I believe there are positive and negative aspects about
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contact
with another intelligent specie
. Fix the agreement mistake
species
However
, overall
, in my opinion
the risk for our Add a comma
opinion,
planet
is too high, mainly because of our energetic resources and a possible new disease thet
could kill our people. Those two points surpass the benefits of learning more about the universe, or even developing a new technology to help us.Correct your spelling
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task response
Make sure to fully address all aspects of the prompt. While you have discussed the two different points of view, it would have been beneficial to further elaborate on the potential benefits and drawbacks of contact with intelligent life forms on other planets.
coherence cohesion
Your essay demonstrates good coherence and cohesion with a logical structure. Make sure to include a clear and concise introduction that provides an overview of your essay and a conclusion that summarizes your main points and presents your opinion clearly.
lexical resource
Your essay showcases a good range of vocabulary and demonstrates your ability to express ideas accurately. To further enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more varied and sophisticated vocabulary to add depth and complexity to your arguments.
grammatical range
Your essay displays a solid grasp of grammar with minimal errors. However, to improve your grammatical range, consider incorporating more complex sentence structures, such as conditional sentences or complex noun phrases, to showcase a higher level of language proficiency.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.