Some people think that it is an individual responsibilty to take care of an environment but others think it is government's job to do so. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Some in the community believe that each and every single
person
should pay attention to the
environment
while
others think it should be done by country states. I strongly agree with the first suggestion as the
environment
facilitates us to live comfortably by providing needs. On one hand, people are blessed to have a plethora of advantages from nature. From the first breath of a single
person
until to
last
breath
environment
is facilitating us to build up our lives.
Air
, water, food, shelter and our every basic amenities are fulfilled by the support from nature.
Hence
is community
also
has the responsibility to respect the virtues of art.
Therefore
people should be alert to their surroundings and take measures to protect our
environment
. Adults should guide children to do so since their childhood. Reducing the usage of polythene and plastic, using proper garbage disposal methods, introducing eco-friendly alternatives on a daily basis, and practising environmentally friendly measurements in gardening are some of the easy and important steps which individuals can take.
For instance
one of the schools in my area had advised to use less polythene on school premises and there they were able to reduce the polythene collection by two-thirds. Children are
also
willing to use alternatives
such
as reusable bags, lunch boxes
instead
of lunch sheets etc.
On the other hand
, depending on mindset always
seeking
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rules and regulations to start environmental
protection
. Even though environmental specialists try to highlight the importance of environmental
protection
some of the society is not willing to pay attention to it. In
this
kind of situation, rules and regulations, proper implementation and fines for offenders are very basic but highly important things to increase the
protection
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oak
. In Sri Lanka, it was not easy to reduce
air
pollution
has been
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caused by old vehicles in the past decade. The
the
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government introduced a law to reduce the usage of vehicles which were not
passed
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the
air
emissions test.
Thereafter
air
pollution could be able to
reduce
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remarkably.
To sum up
, it is a huge responsibility of every single
person
to protect the
environment
. It shouldn't be a matter even though there are rules or not. The
environment
provides crucial assistance in
fulfil
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the basic needs of a
person
.
Hence
is community
also
should able to give friendly and helping hands to the
environment
.
Therefore
I really believe it is the responsibility of every single
person
to protect the
environment
. Governments have to take relevant actions to increase the
protection
of nature. Introducing
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