Some people think that it is an individual responsibilty to take care of an environment but others think it is government's job to do so. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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Some in the community believe that each and every single
person
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should pay attention to the
environment
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while
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others think it should be done by country states. I strongly agree with the first suggestion as the
environment
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facilitates us to live comfortably by providing needs. On one hand, people are blessed to have a plethora of advantages from nature. From the first breath of a single
person
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until to
last
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breath
environment
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is facilitating us to build up our lives.
Air
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, water, food, shelter and our every basic amenities are fulfilled by the support from nature.
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is community
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has the responsibility to respect the virtues of art.
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people should be alert to their surroundings and take measures to protect our
environment
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. Adults should guide children to do so since their childhood. Reducing the usage of polythene and plastic, using proper garbage disposal methods, introducing eco-friendly alternatives on a daily basis, and practising environmentally friendly measurements in gardening are some of the easy and important steps which individuals can take.
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one of the schools in my area had advised to use less polythene on school premises and there they were able to reduce the polythene collection by two-thirds. Children are
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willing to use alternatives
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as reusable bags, lunch boxes
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of lunch sheets etc.
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, depending on mindset always
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rules and regulations to start environmental
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. Even though environmental specialists try to highlight the importance of environmental
protection
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some of the society is not willing to pay attention to it. In
this
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kind of situation, rules and regulations, proper implementation and fines for offenders are very basic but highly important things to increase the
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by hook by
koak
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oak
. In Sri Lanka, it was not easy to reduce
air
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pollution
has been
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caused by old vehicles in the past decade. The
the
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government introduced a law to reduce the usage of vehicles which were not
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the
air
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emissions test.
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air
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pollution could be able to
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remarkably.
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, it is a huge responsibility of every single
person
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to protect the
environment
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. It shouldn't be a matter even though there are rules or not. The
environment
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provides crucial assistance in
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the basic needs of a
person
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.
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is community
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should able to give friendly and helping hands to the
environment
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.
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I really believe it is the responsibility of every single
person
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to protect the
environment
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. Governments have to take relevant actions to increase the
protection
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of nature. Introducing
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