Test 2: In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, people in some countries emigrate from

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the countrysides

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countrysides

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countryside

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to

cities

. The main

reasult

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result

of

this

condition is

decreasing

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a decrease in

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the population of rural.

However

,

this

emigration has some positive effects too.

Moreover

,

This

situation depends on many things like job positions and

lives condition

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life conditions

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in rural and

cities

. I believe it is not a positive development and

goverments

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governments

government

should manage it.

However

,

There

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there

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are more job positions with more salary available in

cities

,

the

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and the

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life conditions in these areas

is

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are

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more complex and harder than

rural

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in rural

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.

In other words

, when anyone

choose

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chooses

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living

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to live

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in

busy

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a busy

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places

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place

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should be aware of heavy traffic, air pollution and wasting time.

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, in

countryside

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the countryside

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finding a

cozy

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cosy

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place is much easier and living there can be more comfortable.

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,

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apply

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who

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those who

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lives

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live

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out of the

cities

and

indusrtial

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industrial

zones want to immigrate

to

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apply

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there to find a better job with more

incom

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income

and prepare a better life condition for

himself

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themselves

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and

his

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their

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family

with

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by

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buying a new car, living in the specious apartment and receiving many other options, they

loose

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lose

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their time, their awesome communications with neighbours and absolutely fresh weather. In conclusion,

this

action has many disadvantages and side effects on the

cities

and rural conditions and

also

on people's lives. The

businesss

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business

cycle will be

effected

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affected

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and changed.

This

problem can

effect

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affect

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the forms and former

and

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apply

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foods cycle.

finally

, I should mention

this

action can have some

permenent

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permanent

advantages but totally it is not beneficial and I

am not agree

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do not agree

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with it and

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the goverment

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goverment

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government

should manage

in

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it in

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a good way and effort to forbid it.