The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousand) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousand) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
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The bar chart illustrates information about the number of male and female students in three various periods of time in the UK and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
Overall
, there were two tendencies for part-time education, where one is a gradual decrease for
men
and the other is a steady rise for women.
For example
, in 1970, the majority of
men
preferred to study partly,
whereas
for women
this
was the same
,
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but on a smaller scale. The figures were at 990 and 750 respectively.
Nevertheless
, in the subsequent years, the number of female part-time students rose to 1100 in 1990, reaching the highest spot in the table.
On the other hand
,
men
experienced a decline with fluctuations, where the numbers dropped significantly to 850 and rose slightly to 880. In comparison, full-time education was chosen more for both genders over the years. In 1970, the numbers for
men
and women were 100 and 50 respectively and the number of full-time students reached 200 for both genders.
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