You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter, •explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute • mention what problems you have encountered with parking • what you recommend to solve the problems
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that there is a parking issue in our building as I started to commute on
bicycle Change preposition
by
from
Change preposition
apply
last
week and there is no empty space to park it. I will explain the condition by providing all the information which I noticed.
Firstly
, it is beneficial for me to travel to work by bicycle as it is a good way to keep the body in a
perfect shape. Correct article usage
apply
Addition to
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In addition
it
, it saves my time because there is a huge traffic rush in the morning hours and it Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
benefits economically
. Correct pronoun usage
me economically
Therefore
, I decide
to commute by cycle.
Wrong verb form
decided
Moreover
, our building has less space for vehicles but there is a problem that workers even parking their cars to
the area which is assigned to Change preposition
in
the
cycles or motorcycles. The slots available for bicycles are already limited and some staff members make it worse by parking their cars over there.
Now, I cannot ask you to expand the parking zone Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
for
bicycle
. Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
However
, I request you to make intervention
so that employees park their vehicles Correct article usage
an intervention
according to
the allocate
zones. I hope you consider Change the form of the verb
allocated
this
in mind and take a
quick action on Remove the article
apply
this
.
Yours Sincerely,
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