The problem of homelessness is on the rise in several significant urban centers globally. What is the main cause of this problem? What measures could be taken be solve it by government and communities?

Currently,
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is a pressing social issue that affects societies worldwide which causes the pressure of family.
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engaging
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to
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and understand the homeless
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social activities can deal with
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problem, the
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should organise family counselling
programs
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. The main cause of
homelessness
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is the conflict in the family. To put it simply, when the family
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difficulties in finance with the lack of
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, the relationship between family members become bad because the stress of paying bill arises. Because of
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reason, members of the family split and left without stable accommodation.
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, people become homeless and they will have a lot of physical health issues because they are exposed to harsh weather. To tackle
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problem,
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should participate in social activities.
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societies can keep in touch with the homeless through social events,
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people deeply understand the situation of the homeless and reduce the stigma associated with
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.
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reason, the homeless can receive the
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of
communities
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which help them have a better life and reduce the proportion of
homelessness
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. Take Vietnamese for an example, by approaching the homeless from
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, many homeless have a stable place to live and a suitable job to take care of themselves.
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, the
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forced
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to create
programs
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which avoid family breakdown to cope with
homelessness
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. To explain in more detail, family counselling
programs
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will find the root cause of family stress which leads to the family splitting. In
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way, the
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have immediate
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to reconcile the stress in the family.
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, families promote inclusion and cut down the
homelessness
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rate. In conclusion, the root cause of
homelessness
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is the lack of family connection. The approach to
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from
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along with
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establishing family counselling
programs
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by the
government
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deals with
homelessness
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.

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