The diagram shows Lakeside development between the years 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the changes
of
Lakeside in 2000 and 2009.
What stands out was some residential areas Change preposition
in
replaced
by amenity Add a missing verb
were replaced
centers
and industrial complexes in 2009, Change the spelling
centres
on the other hand
, the lake dwindling into a pond was another striking point.
To commence with, the residential areas in the Northwest remained the same place. Additionally
, the school and the river which were located in the center were still kept at
the same position.
To the North, Change preposition
in
while
The Derelic warehouse was abolished to place a car park for residents, the Old Town which was in front of it also
was separated to build offices and a university. Moreover
, The Art Center was completely replaced by a cinema in 2009 and the shopping center
was built on the position of a residential area on the West. The development of Lakeside not only was marked by the many amenities built but Change the spelling
centre
also
the expanding
of industrial complexes on the Southeast which led to the abolishment of the residential area in Replace the word
expansion
this
place.Submitted by lantran180487 on
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