The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line chart represents Jam the
consumption
of strawberry, Lemon, and cherry in Asia countries from 1991 to 2014.
What stands out from the graph is that utilization of strawberry and Lemon have gradually decreased over the years, whereas
consumption
of cherries started in 2006 and drastically increased over the next Eight years.
Looking into details, strawberries were the most consumed Jam in 1994 and that figure has
Unnecessary verb
apply
further
increased to 160 tons in 1996. However
, consumption
of strawberries started to fall sharply from 1996 to 2006. Despite Lemon showing a constant pattern of utilization over the years, there was a sudden drop in 2014.
By contrast
, cherry consumption
began in 2006 and consumption
went up to 80 tons in 2011. Following that, the utilization of cherries plummeted in 2014 indicating a similar downward trend for all Jams.Submitted by thisarananb on
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