The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004. Identify the main trends and summarize the data.
The bar chart shows
students
attending three different course
over Change to a plural noun
courses
four
years
from 2001 to 2004.
In 2001, 4.3 million
students
took course
A. n
2002, 2.5 Correct your spelling
In
million
people
attended course
A. Moving onto the year 2003, 3.5 million
people
took course
A. Finally
in Add a comma
Finally,
2004
the Add a comma
2004,
number
of students
taking course
A had increased to 4.5 million
students
.
Moving onto course
B
, in 2001, 2.4 million
students
took the course
. In 2002, 4.4 million
people
attended course
B
. In 2003, 1.8 million
people
took course
B
. By 2004, the number
of students
taking course
B
had decreased to 2.8 million
studends
.
Taking a look at Correct your spelling
students
the
Correct article usage
apply
course
C
we can see that in 2001, 2 million
students
took the course
. In 2002, 2 million
people
attended course
C
. In the year 2003, 3 million
people
took course
C
. By 2004, the number
of students
taking course
A had increased to 5 million
students
.
If we analyze the data we can see several trends emerging. Firstly
, the number
of candidates taking course
A has stayed almost the same over the four
years
, despite declining in 2003. The number
of candidates taking course
B
has gradually declined over the four
years
from 4.4 million
in 2001 to 2.8 million
in 2004. However
the Add a comma
However,
number
of candidates taking course
C
has grown from 2 million
to 5 million
over the four
years
.
In conclusion then
, one can say that over the four year
period from 2001 to 2004, there has been an increase in Add a hyphen
four-year
overall
Correct article usage
the overall
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
students
attending all three courses.Submitted by maukaburtubel on
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