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The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004. Identify the main trends and summarize the data.

The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004. Identify the main trends and summarize the data.
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The bar chart shows
students
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 attending three different
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course
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courses
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 over
four
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years
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 from 2001 to 2004. In 2001, 4.3
million
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students
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 took
course
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 A.
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In
 2002, 2.5
million
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people
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 attended
course
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 A. Moving onto the year 2003, 3.5
million
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people
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 took
course
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 A.
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Finally
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 in
2004
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2004,
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 the
number
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 of
students
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 taking
course
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 A had increased to 4.5
million
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students
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. Moving onto
course
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B
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, in 2001, 2.4
million
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students
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 took the
course
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. In 2002, 4.4
million
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people
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 attended
course
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B
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. In 2003, 1.8
million
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people
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 took
course
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B
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. By 2004, the
number
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 of
students
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 taking
course
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B
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 had decreased to 2.8
million
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studends
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students
. Taking a look at
the
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course
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C
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 we can see that in 2001, 2
million
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students
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 took the
course
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. In 2002, 2
million
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people
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 attended
course
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C
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. In the year 2003, 3
million
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people
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 took
course
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C
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. By 2004, the
number
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 of
students
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 taking
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 A had increased to 5
million
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students
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. If we analyze the data we can see several trends emerging.
Firstly
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, the
number
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 of candidates taking
course
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 A has stayed almost the same over the
four
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years
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, despite declining in 2003. The
number
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 of candidates taking
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B
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 has gradually declined over the
four
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years
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 from 4.4
million
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 in 2001 to 2.8
million
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 in 2004.
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However
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However,
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 the
number
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 of candidates taking
course
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C
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 has grown from 2
million
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 to 5
million
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 over the
four
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years
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. In conclusion
then
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, one can say that over the
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four year
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four-year
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 period from 2001 to 2004, there has been an increase in
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overall
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the overall
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numbers
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number
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 of
students
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 attending all three courses.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, course, four, years, million, people, number, b, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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