The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.

The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age.
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The given pie charts illustrate the data of a survey of the primary objectives
such
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as achievement at work, doing hobbies, spending time with family and other
factors
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which make
people
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happy between the age group 20-50 years.
Overall
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,
people
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of all age groups are mostly interested in achieving goals at work and least bothered by other
factors
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.
Firstly
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, 31% of youngsters under 30 are happy with their achievements at work,
while
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22% are involved in hobbies. 18% of them are concerned about having a good physical appearance
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15% show interest in travelling. The lowest percentage accounts for other
factors
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.
In contrast
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to the youngsters, 32% of
people
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over 30 years have much interest in the achievement of tasks and 24% accounting for interest in their hobbies. Financial security is
also
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a reason which makes oldies happy commencing around 20%. 14% of the
people
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love Spending time with their families and the rest of the 10% are interested in other
factors
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.
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