The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.

The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates.

Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.
The diagram illustrates the sequence of college admission in the university for secondary
school
graduates.
Overall
, as a new aspirant, one should follow a series of steps from finishing a curriculum in high
school
until the freshman's entrance to the university.
First,
once the secondary
school
certificate is furnished, the applicant should complete the form for admission which is downloadable on the
school
's website alongside pertinent documents to be submitted to the administration.
Then
it will be assessed during the initial acceptance and
further
compilation of papers should be done when necessary and the total timeline is within 2 weeks. Once approved, the successful applicant will proceed to finish the process of enrollment and will have to select the necessary subjects.
Moreover
, applicants will
then
proceed with the Dean Registration and
finally
enter the university.
However
, an option of an alternative course is available and can be applied once the decision of unacceptance is received, which entails the same process of application.
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  • application process
  • admission requirements
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