In many countries, people are living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates pronlems for governments. Other people think that there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's world,
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of
people
is getting longer and
ageing
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the ageing
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poulation
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population
are
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incresing
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increasing
. Some
of
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the
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apply
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people
believe that
growing
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the growing
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elderly
popoulation
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population
lead
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leads
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some
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to some
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problems for
the
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apply
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governments
while
others are of the opinion that
ageing
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the ageing
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population
has
benefits
in some aspects.
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essay will discuss both advantages and drawbacks
ofhaving
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of having
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an aging
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aging
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ageing
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population
. From the point of
view
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view,
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people
believe
ageing
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the ageing
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population
creates
pronlems
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problems
for
government
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the government
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,
it is clear that
one of the main
reason
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reasons
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of
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for
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this
problem is decreasing workforce.
For instance
, especially for the physical
works
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work
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there is a decline and these
governments
are looking for workers from
another
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another country
other countries
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countries
and
this
situation creates extra costs and legal issues.
In addition
to that,
governments
with
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an aging
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aging
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ageing
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population
must ensure good healthcare
ans
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and
insurance system since elderly
people
starts
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to use
healthcare
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the healthcare
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system more often and
also
this
case creates costs for
governments
.
However
, having an ageing
population
have
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has
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some
benefits
on
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for
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society.
For example
, raising a child with grandparents, not with babysitters, strengthened their family bonds and these children
also
can easily learn traditional things from their grandparents. Not only
this
, in today's world having more elderly
people
is a sign for developed
countries
. It means that
government
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the government
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ensure
the
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wealth and
economical
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economic
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stability, so these
people
don't have to leave their country and they
grow
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their children
in
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to
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good standards.
Also
, it shows the migration rate is low. In third-world, developing
countries
migration rate is
evry
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very
high and
people
try to
grow
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raise
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more
child
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children
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in
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with
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bad standards. Since educated
people
are
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have
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started to move
developed
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to developed
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countries
their ageing
population
is very low. In conclusion, having an elderly
population
both
have
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has
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benefits
and drawbacks, but if all of the positive and negative sides are concerned, I would personally argue that
,
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having an aging
population
is a good sign for
countries
development status and
also
have
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has
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many
benefits
while
raising children.
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