In many countries, people are living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates pronlems for governments. Other people think that there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's world,
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a lifetime
the lifetime
people
is getting longer and Use synonyms
ageing
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the ageing
poulation
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population
are
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is
incresing
. Some Correct your spelling
increasing
of
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apply
the
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apply
people
believe that Use synonyms
growing
elderly Correct article usage
the growing
popoulation
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population
lead
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leads
some
problems for Change preposition
to some
the
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apply
governments
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while
others are of the opinion that Linking Words
ageing
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the ageing
population
has Use synonyms
benefits
in some aspects. Use synonyms
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essay will discuss both advantages and drawbacks Linking Words
ofhaving
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of having
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an aging
aging
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ageing
population
.
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view
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view,
people
believe Use synonyms
ageing
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the ageing
population
creates Use synonyms
pronlems
for Correct your spelling
problems
government
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the government
it is clear that
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reason
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reasons
of
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for
this
problem is decreasing workforce. Linking Words
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, especially for the physical Linking Words
works
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work
governments
are looking for workers from Use synonyms
another
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another country
other countries
countries
and Use synonyms
this
situation creates extra costs and legal issues. Linking Words
In addition
to that, Linking Words
governments
with Use synonyms
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an aging
aging
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ageing
population
must ensure good healthcare Use synonyms
ans
insurance system since elderly Correct your spelling
and
people
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starts
to use Change the verb form
start
healthcare
system more often and Correct article usage
the healthcare
also
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this
case creates costs for Linking Words
governments
.
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However
, having an ageing Linking Words
population
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have
some Correct subject-verb agreement
has
benefits
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on
society. Change preposition
for
For example
, raising a child with grandparents, not with babysitters, strengthened their family bonds and these children Linking Words
also
can easily learn traditional things from their grandparents. Not only Linking Words
this
, in today's world having more elderly Linking Words
people
is a sign for developed Use synonyms
countries
. It means that Use synonyms
government
ensure Correct article usage
the government
the
wealth and Correct article usage
apply
economical
stability, so these Replace the word
economic
people
don't have to leave their country and they Use synonyms
grow
their children Verb problem
raise
in
good standards. Change preposition
to
Also
, it shows the migration rate is low. In third-world, developing Linking Words
countries
migration rate is Use synonyms
evry
high and Correct your spelling
very
people
try to Use synonyms
grow
more Verb problem
raise
child
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children
in
bad standards. Since educated Change preposition
with
people
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are
started to move Verb problem
have
developed
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to developed
countries
their ageing Use synonyms
population
is very low.
In conclusion, having an elderly Use synonyms
population
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have
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benefits
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,
having an aging Remove the comma
apply
population
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countries
development status and Use synonyms
also
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have
many Correct subject-verb agreement
has
benefits
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while
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