The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates a central heating system in a house.
This
shows how the Linking Words
water
flows through tanks, and radiators and Use synonyms
then
pumps them into the home.
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Firstly
, the cold Linking Words
water
flowed inside the apartment and was stored in the tank. Use synonyms
Then
glide to the boiler on the ground floor which boils using gas or oil. From there it pumped around the residence through pipes. After that flowed to radiators. The small tubes inside them help to heat the rooms in the flat. Linking Words
In addition
, some of the Linking Words
water
is directly gushed into taps to provide hot Use synonyms
water
for daily use. Use synonyms
This
process is repeated to provide hot Linking Words
water
and heat the rooms in the residence.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, once the Linking Words
water
flowed to the building through pipes and radiators. It is returned to the boiler to reheat and circulate around the mansion again. Use synonyms
Also
, part of the hot Linking Words
water
rolls into the taps in the rooms as well. Use synonyms
This
process happens continuously.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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