The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts compare the populace of Yemen and Italy
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based
age
, which is divided into three different categories in 2000, with an
anticipation for 50 Remove the article
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years
later.
In Yemen, most of the population
in 2000 was people from 0-14 years
of age
at about 50%, followed by 15-59 years
old at just about 4% less than the previous group, with the smallest group who are elderlies over 60 years
old at only 3.6 percent
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per cent
However
, it is expected that 15-59 years
of age
be the most
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population
in 2050 at close to 60% of people. Similar to before, in 2050, it is predicted that senior citizens will be the least number of population
.
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the population
By contrast
, in Italy
most of the society in 2000 was people Add a comma
Italy,
in
15-59 Change preposition
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years
of age
and the second most population
was over 60s at 61.6% and 24.1%, respectively. Youngesters
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Youngsters
however
, formed the smallest society in
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this
year. Fifty years
later, middle-aged
group will fall in number and is expected to be 46.2% of the community but elderlies is predicted to increase sharply to 42.3%. Add an article
the middle-aged
Younger
generation still is expected to be the smallest Correct article usage
The younger
population
at 11.5%.
Overall
, the diagrams suggest that in both Yemen and Italy
the Add a comma
Italy,
population
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