The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts compare the populace of Yemen and Italy
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based
on their
age
, which is divided into three different categories in 2000, with
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anticipation for 50
years
later. In Yemen, most of the
population
in 2000 was people from 0-14
years
of
age
at about 50%, followed by 15-59
years
old at just about 4% less than the previous group, with the smallest group who are elderlies over 60
years
old at only 3.6
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.
However
, it is expected that 15-59
years
of
age
be the
most
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population
in 2050 at close to 60% of people. Similar to before, in 2050, it is predicted that senior citizens will be the least number of
population
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.
By contrast
, in
Italy
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most of the society in 2000 was people
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15-59
years
of
age
and the second most
population
was over 60s at 61.6% and 24.1%, respectively.
Youngesters
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Youngsters
,
however
, formed the smallest society
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this
year. Fifty
years
later,
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group will fall in number and is expected to be 46.2% of the community but elderlies is predicted to increase sharply to 42.3%.
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generation still is expected to be the smallest
population
at 11.5%.
Overall
, the diagrams suggest that in both Yemen and
Italy
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the
population
will
becom
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become
older in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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