In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Since there are prominent technological advances

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present today, companies often insist

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that their items are fresh by using any method during advertising.

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possible cause is the high competition among businesses

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terms of customer's money, so I will examine the reasons and the negativity in

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essay. To commence with, at present, there are a huge number of competitors in

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in the same sector so with

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support from commercials to

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prove that their products are new.

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shop, even though they are not fresh, businesses pay famous influencers on social media to do

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videos.

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, their fans get convinced that

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are new so they buy them.

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, in order to earn more income among parallel entrepreneurs, they make use of social media platforms very frequently by any

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to insist their products are new.

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, it is a waste of money when considering

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the people who buy these products without knowing they are not really new because of ads.

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, some clothing stores sell their older and damaged dresses by doing attractive photoshoots using the technology and

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on Facebook to make people believe they are new. So, customers lose their money because of

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negative development. In conclusion,

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businesses

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try to deceive their clients through advertising

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of older commodities to earn profit

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withstand against other similar industries. So I think

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development negatively affects

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society because customers buy things which are not worth

to buy

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,

hence

it wastes their wealth.