The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the expenditure on
books
in four different countries
Germany
,
France
, Italy and
Austria
from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
,
Germany
was the nation where the spending on
books
was highest,
while
the amount of money paid for
books
in
Austria
was lowest during the period shown. In 1995, around 80
million
USD
were paid for
books
by readers in
Germany
. In the same year, the amount of money used to pay for
books
in
France
, Italy,
Austria
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and Austria
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were around 53
million
, 50
million
and 30
million
USD
respectively. One year later, the consumption of
books
in Italy increased considerably and almost caught up with
France
. In 2003, there was an enormous increase in book consumption in
Austria
around 60
million
USD
and
over
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in
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Italy with only 59
million
USD
.
While
the amount of money that was used in
Germany
dropped minimally to 84
million
and
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apply
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lower than
previous
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in previous
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years, the consumption of
books
in
France
rose gradually
during
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over
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8 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words books, germany, france, austria, million, usd with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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