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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
In the
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The
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 chart graph
illustrate
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 the percentage of tourists to England who visited a group of different
attractions
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 in Brighton .
Overall
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,the number of visitors to all three
attractions
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 experienced different levels of attendance. we can see how Pavilions sharply
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 from 1990 to 1995 years.
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 the number of visitors to the Art Gallery dropped dramatically. In
details
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, in 1990
attractions
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 the“pavilions”
visited
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around
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by around
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 50 %
people
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of people
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 who visited Brighton
attractions
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. Attraction of the “art gallery” began to rise sharply in 1985 , and by the end of the period, the art gallery significantly dropped. But by
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2010 the pavilion began to decline. Between 1995 and 2010, the Pier showed a gradual increase in popularity, rising from around 10% to nearly 20%. Meanwhile, the Festival remained stable, with only slight changes, staying close to 30%. By the end of the period, the Pier became more popular than the Art Gallery but still did not reach the level of the Festival.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words attractions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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