What's the right age for parents to get their kids a cell phone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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what stage of life parents can give cellular Change preposition
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phone
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phones
for
their Change preposition
to
children
.
In my Change the punctuation
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opinion
the right Add a comma
opinion,
age
for children
to use
a cell
phone
is 16 to 18 years. I believe this
essay will give idea
about when a parent should buy a Add an article
an idea
cell
phone
for their children
.
To begin
with
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with,
cell
phone
are part of everyone’s life whether they are young or old. Almost, 99% of the population uses Fix the agreement mistake
phones
cell
phone
for various purposes. people Fix the agreement mistake
phones
use
cell
phone
for communication, sending e-mails, transferring money, Fix the agreement mistake
phones
as well as
browsing information for education and also
for business purposes. Now the days
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Nowadays
Children
are more into technology than the
adults. But, the right Correct article usage
apply
age
for a kid to use
a phone
is above 16 years. Because by
16-year-old they know how to control their limitations in using their Change preposition
apply
phone
. below 16-year
kids will be more Correct word choice
16-year-old
addictive
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addicted
in
using phones for playing games and Change preposition
to
also
be tempting
to Wrong verb form
tempted
use
vulnerable sites. For example
, a boy named Ramesh was given a phone
by his father when he was 10-year-old
so that he Correct your spelling
10 years old
can
download some information for his social science project. Upon Wrong verb form
could
browsing
he saw an advertisement for a game which diverted him to download and play the game where he ended up Add a comma
browsing,
in
not finishing the homework and was punished in school the next day.
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apply
Furthermore
, children
are in developing
stage till the Correct article usage
the developing
age
of 18. Children
are taught about obedience, truthfulness , good
habits from their childhood. Frequent Correct word choice
and good
uses
of Fix the agreement mistake
use
cell
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a cell
phone
not only bring various health problems like vision issues, deafness, immobility and worst cases tumour but also
it
destroys their moral character. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For Instance
, a boy started playing games at the age
of 14. His parents couldn’t control him. He became very disobedient and anger
towards his parent.
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angry
Finally
to summarize I believe it will be always good for the parents to give the Add a comma
Finally,
cell
phone
to their offpring
after the Correct your spelling
offspring
offering
age
of 16 where they can be of little understanding and be matured
enough to understand the advantage and Replace the word
mature
disadvantage
of using Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
phone
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the phone
a phone
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