What's the right age for parents to get their kids a cell phone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
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what stage of life parents can give cellular
phone
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phones
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for
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to
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their
children
.
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In my
opinion
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opinion,
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the right
age
for
children
to
use
a
cell
phone
is 16 to 18 years. I believe
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an idea
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about when a parent should buy a
cell
phone
for their
children
.
To begin
with
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cell
phone
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phones
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are part of everyone’s life whether they are young or old. Almost, 99% of the population uses
cell
phone
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phones
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for various purposes. people
use
cell
phone
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phones
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for communication, sending e-mails, transferring money,
as well as
browsing information for education and
also
for business purposes.
Now the days
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Nowadays
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,
Children
are more into technology than
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adults. But, the right
age
for a kid to
use
a
phone
is above 16 years. Because
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16-year-old they know how to control their limitations in using their
phone
. below
16-year
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kids will be more
addictive
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using phones for playing games and
also
be
tempting
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to
use
vulnerable sites.
For example
, a boy named Ramesh was given a
phone
by his father when he was
10-year-old
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10 years old
so that he
can
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could
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download some information for his social science project. Upon
browsing
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browsing,
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he saw an advertisement for a game which diverted him to download and play the game where he ended up
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not finishing the homework and was punished in school the next day.
Furthermore
,
children
are in
developing
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the developing
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stage till the
age
of 18.
Children
are taught about obedience, truthfulness ,
good
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and good
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habits from their childhood. Frequent
uses
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use
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of
cell
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a cell
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phone
not only bring various health problems like vision issues, deafness, immobility and worst cases tumour but
also
it
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destroys their moral character.
For Instance
, a boy started playing games at the
age
of 14. His parents couldn’t control him. He became very disobedient and
anger
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towards his parent.
Finally
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to summarize I believe it will be always good for the parents to give the
cell
phone
to their
offpring
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offspring
offering
after the
age
of 16 where they can be of little understanding and be
matured
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enough to understand the advantage and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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of using
phone
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the phone
a phone
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.
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