The charts below show the changes in ownweshio of electrical aooliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The chart illustrates the
differances
that Correct your spelling
differences
difference
occurs
in the ownership of electrical Correct subject-verb agreement
occur
applances
in regards to the number of households Correct your spelling
appliances
useing
the Correct your spelling
using
iteams
from 1920 to 2019.
In general, of all the electrical appliances given, the refrigerator was bought the most significantly by a complete 100 Correct your spelling
items
teams
percentage
of the households.Replace the word
per cent
However
washing Add a comma
However,
machine
Fix the agreement mistake
machines
catches
up with Wrong verb form
caught
this
advancement around the year 2000 and have
Wrong verb form
had
a
parallel sales with refrigerators.
In the case of refrigerators, there is a steep Correct article usage
apply
escalations
of people buying the appliance from Change the noun form
escalation
a
O to 100 Change the article
an
percent
from the year 1920 to 2019. Change the spelling
per cent
In
addition
we Add a comma
addition,
also
observe, the sales become constant from the year 2000.
Vaccum
cleaner Correct your spelling
Vacuum
also
shows a vertical elevation in the number of ownerships, starting from 30 household
in the early years and expanding to Change to a plural noun
households
a
100 in the later years.
Correct article usage
apply
In contrast
to Washing
machine, the growth noted in the other two categories have been significant Add an article
the Washing
a Washing
wherase
in the case of washing machine, the number of Correct your spelling
whereas
where
houshold
Correct your spelling
households
household
have
increased to a little over Change the verb form
has
than
70.Change preposition
apply
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