The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The graphs depict the value in
Australian
dollars of Australian
trade
, with China, Japan and the United States, between 2004 and 2009. There are three charts illustrating exports
and imports
in billions of Australian
dollars, one chart for each country.
Overall
, Australian's
Correct your spelling
Australia's
imports
are greater Change preposition
than then
then
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the
exports
with
all Change preposition
of
counries
, except Correct your spelling
countries
with
Japan, Change preposition
apply
which
Correct pronoun usage
whose
exports
are greater than imports
.
Analysing Australia's trade
with China, exports
and imports
had an increasing
Replace the word
increase
since
2004 to 2009, The Change preposition
from
imports
were above exports
until middle
of 2008, when Add an article
the middle
exports
became higher than imports
.
Concerning Australian's
Correct your spelling
Australia's
trade
with Japan, imports
and exports
were at
the same amount in 2004, Change preposition
apply
whereas
exports
had a increasing
during Wrong verb form
increased
this
period, achieving the double of imports
in 2008, when exports
had a decreasing
Wrong verb form
decreased
,
but Remove the comma
apply
keeping
higher than Verb problem
remained
imports
.
About trade
with the United States, Australian
bought more than Fix the agreement mistake
Australians
it
sold. Both, Correct pronoun usage
they
imports
and exports
had the same behavior
, rising a little since the Change the spelling
behaviour
beggining
and Correct your spelling
beginning
then
falling near 2008.Submitted by fmulato on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, trade, exports, imports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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