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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. What is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

#spite #advances #agriculture #people #world #case
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agriculture plays
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 vital role in several aspects. Despite the agricultural technology has
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considerable improvement,
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 portion of people are still fighting to overcome their food
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 discuss what are the causes
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possible solutions to reduce the
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problem. On the one hand, considering the past decades, it can be clearly seen the enhancement of
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 sector.
The modern
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 technology
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 to increase yield and reduce the possible disease of crops.
However
, the latest agricultural technology required a high cost for initial implementation with the
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latest
 knowledge.
For example
, the experts have
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developed crops which can be grown under
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requirement
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 of
water
 and nutrients.
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 the
seed
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seeds
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 of the said varieties are at
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 cost. The
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world
, are not in a position to spend and
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this
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enormous
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Therefore
, they always stick to conventional agricultural practices which are leading to a number of problems.
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hungry
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natural resources
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 equally in the
world
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countries
 contain rich
soil
 and
water
 sources which are essential for cultivation.
For instance
, tropical
countries
such
 as India, Sri Lanka and
Bangaladesh
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Bangladesh
 have suitable
soil
,
soil
 nutrients and adequate
water
while
 African and
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countries
 are suffering from
water
 sources and rich
soil
. Due
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 reason, some
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to
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 the
countries
 which are unable to utilize their
soil
 and
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other
 resources for farming.
This
 is one of
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 ways to overcome the said problem.
To conclude
, there are various options
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 be provided to reduce the
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 issues.
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possible directions can
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 to solve
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this
 problem and sweep from the
world
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task response
Make sure to clearly address all parts of the question in your essay. In this case, you did not fully explore the reasons for why people still go hungry despite advances in agriculture.
coherence cohesion
Organize your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. In this case, the introduction and conclusion are too brief and do not effectively introduce and summarize the main points of your essay.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use a wider range of phrasal verbs, idiomatic expressions, and academic vocabulary. Additionally, pay attention to word choice and use precise and appropriate language.
grammatical range
Work on your grammar and sentence structure to ensure accuracy and variety. Avoid repetitive language and errors in subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence fragments.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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