The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates how instant
noodles
are produced. It can be observed , that
whole
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process takes 8 stages and requires special
manufacture
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conditions to be finished.
First
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step is transporting flour from storage silos to the
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. After that mixer stirs it with oil and water and that mixture goes through rollers to become dough sheets .
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the fourth stage special machine slits dough until strip condition and produces
noodles
discs. The next step of that process is cooking
noodles
disks with oil and drying them . The
last
but one stage is packaging cooked noodle disks
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the cups and adding vegetables and specific spices. And in
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step cups with instant
noodles
go through
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with label paper and they are ready for sealing and sale.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufactured
  • ingredients
  • dough
  • rolled out
  • thin strips
  • steaming process
  • partially cooked
  • fried
  • dehydrating
  • packaged
  • distribution
  • quality control
  • standards
  • flavoring powder
  • sauce packet
  • traditional pasta
  • dehydration
  • instant cooking
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