The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea.

The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea.
The figure illustrates two methods of black
tea
production.
Overall
, it is possible to produce the
tea
through traditional or modern processes and each one has special advantages. The differences of the methods are at the middle
stage
where the dimension of the dry
tea
leaves are formed. In the first
stage
, the
tea
leaves are picked from the tree. In order to improve the quality of
tea
, just a few top leaves and buds are picked.
Then
at the withering
stage
, fans pass the air through leaves that keep on the rack.
This
step continues until the moisture declines by 60%. In the next
stage
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2 types of processes can be selected. The old method is rolling leaves
are rolled
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and Enzymes are released. The second method, which is faster and granular pieces become smaller, is called cutting.
The next step is
known as Oxidation leaves are spread and rolled on tiles. At
this
time because of the combination of Ensymes and air the colour of leaves changes to coppercolour.
Finally
, the
last
step is drying which is used in order to release the flavor and aroma of leaves.
Also
at
this
stage
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37% of the remaining leaves' moisture decreases and the total moisture reaches 3%.
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