Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Even though, I agree that the consumption of more concentrated

sugar

including foodstuffs and beverages has caused various diseases in

people

. In my point of view, the intake of high

sugar

-containing items cannot be made less by making their price higher, so I will examine the health hazards caused by extreme getting of calories and why it cannot be minimized by increasing their price tags. To commence with, at present, most

people

all over the world have lots of non-communicable diseases because of unhealthy eating habits like eating and drinking sugary things.

For example

, if someone drinks a cup of Coca-Cola, he is drinking more than five tablespoons of

sugar

, and

as a result

, he is susceptible to diabetes, obesity, high blood pressure, etc. Having said that, getting a huge percentage of

sugar

from unhealthy

foods

leads to many disorders. But, still,

people

buy expensive

foods

which have lots of calories, even though they are aware of the nutritional facts

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since it has become an addiction.

For instance

, Nutella which has a high percentage of

sugar

, is one of the most popular breakfasts.

However

,

people

purchase those regardless of their high cost.

Thus

, making the

foods

more costly cannot minimize the amount of

sugar

individuals eat. In conclusion, most humans nowadays suffer from different health complications

such

as diabetes and obesity

due to

the wrong diets they take, which I agree too. But, I believe it cannot be corrected by making high-calorie food items expensive. Unless

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a healthy alternative

instead

of

sugar

can be added to

foods

to make them sweeter.