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Some people feel that learning a foreign languageis an essential component of a child's education. Others feel that learning a foreign language is often a waste of time that can be better spent on learning technologyand other vocational subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #languageis #component #child #education #language #waste #time #technologyand #subjects
A segment of society
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 that teaching international linguistics offers no benefits to teenagers, and should be replaced with technical and job-based training programs.
This
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both viewpoints and I will provide my opinion
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 the end. Foreign linguistics proficiency is important in order to find employment in multinational companies.
Due to
diverse
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languages
 spoken around the world, many multinational companies are focusing on international
languages
,
such
 as English, for their regular communication across the globe.
This
 offers a
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medium of communication for its employees who live in
a different geographical locations
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a different geographical location
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.
Hence
, It is important to have wisdom about
English
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 language in order to increase employment
prospectus
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 in those companies; which in
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 to technical skills,
also
 demand
an
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expertise in speaking English.
On the other hand
, some people think teaching children about technologies and vocational courses is better than learning
foreign
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 language Through technical and job-oriented courses, they will acquire knowledge and training in using the latest tools
pf
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 technology,
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ms word
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 and Microsoft
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;
therefore
, employers can save money and their resources
as a result
 of not putting much efforts in teaching about those subjects.
Hence
, more awareness about those domains will complement their employment perspectives by fostering job-based traits and skills in
school goers
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schoolgoers
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.
However
, I believe it is crucial to learn about foreign
languages
 in order to open
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 of job opportunities in other parts of the world, and in
children'
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 native
country
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, alike. At the same time,
the
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technical skills are important to enter the job world seamlessly. In conclusion, schools should try to incorporate both for
overall
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 development of a child, including vocational and technical training, and teaching foreign
languages
.
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