The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The flow chart gives essential
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regarding the impact of deforestation.
Overall
, the cutting down of forests brings an array of negative consequences, including floods, erosion of soil, reduction of biodiversity and risks of drought. The primary consequence and result of deforestation could be divided
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four significant categories. First of all, heavy logging equipments
copress
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compress
the soil, making it hard and baked. Owning to
this
, the
rain water
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runs off, causing devastating floods.
Secondly
,
due to
the cutting
trees
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of trees
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from the forest, there are fewer roots to hold the top soil
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causing its erosion.
Thirdly
, deforestation leads to lesser moisture returning to the air by plants triggering a decrease in precipitations that can lead to an increase of drought. All of
this
and the increased risk of accidental or deliberate burning of
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(that micro-organisms depend upon) turns out to be a massive loss to the biodiversity.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • flow chart
  • consequence
  • deforestation
  • process
  • cutting down
  • loss
  • forest cover
  • wildlife habitat
  • disruption
  • ecosystems
  • soil erosion
  • water quality
  • release
  • carbon dioxide
  • atmosphere
  • contribute
  • global warming
  • climate change
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